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19 November 2010 @ 06:13 pm
[ISHIHIME FIC] well... UlquiIshiHime really, but hey!  
Title: Color
Author: chiave_trust
Rating: R for smex. Because I wanted to write something smexy.
Warning: Short-short.


The main thing that Ishida Uryuu had managed to think, when his thoughts were at all coherent during this, was: Color. He saw color.

Everything else was monochrome or, at best, sepia; here there was color and life and warmth, so much warmth.

And it wasn't just the flush of her body, the way she gave little moans and whimpers at every small change of motion; no, it was how she reached out to them, invited them, as if her pale skin was an invitation to a wonderland. (It was.)

Her brilliant hair was loose, a fury of orange, looking like a small sun especially so close to his whiteness - Uryuu hadn't wanted him to be there. Not originally. But he had quite imagined that this was the closest the arrancar could get to experience love; besides, it was touching, Orihime's full-body blush as she had asked him about the situation.

So much color.

- and now she was warm and wet and his princess, and even though she was reaching out to see if the tear-faced arrancar was warm too, if he could make little sounds of pleasure and smile even as awkward as it all was, everything was shining and the black and blue only made it stand out more, like bold lines in a sketch, bold and lovely and a frenzy of colors, pinks and reds and white and skin and smiles -

Their own little world of color.
enisy: Bleach:: Ulquihime (Eyesmex)enisy on November 19th, 2010 11:21 pm (UTC)
I APPROVE! I love the imagery and the flow and wahhh, there should be more of this trio in the fandom. (If I'd known threesomes were allowed I would have written something like this, too...!)
Kit-chan: a bit odd you knowchiave_trust on November 19th, 2010 11:22 pm (UTC)
Truth be told, I'm not sure it's allowed, but I WANTED TO WRITE SOMETHING SMEXY.

It's like a tradition for me and these contests or something. x.x
valentineninja: RenjiRukiavalentineninja on November 19th, 2010 11:48 pm (UTC)
Wow. I'm not much of an UryuuOrihime fan, but I think you've done a wonderful job here! I love your contrast between his white and Orihime's array of colors. I loved that you packed so much into so little words.(I also love that Ulquiorra was in there, since he needs a lot of love, too).:D Anyway, I enjoyed this very much!
Kit-chan: i'm not worthychiave_trust on November 20th, 2010 02:18 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D
Solitude Whispers: IshidaxOrihime [pr0n]winter_yuy on November 20th, 2010 12:55 am (UTC)
I demand you write more of this pairing. It was amazing! ♥
Kit-chan: i'm not worthychiave_trust on November 20th, 2010 01:46 am (UTC)
Believe it or not, this is the first time (well, second, if you count my previous entry) I have written in MONTHS.
Solitude Whispers: Ulquiorra [Gigai]winter_yuy on November 20th, 2010 10:20 am (UTC)
I know how you feel! I recently had a plot bunny and i haven't written anything in months. I feel better now that my brain is wanting to process ideas, though. XD
Kit-chan: i can be lucidchiave_trust on November 20th, 2010 11:54 am (UTC)
I guess after the first piece I wrote I got a bit excited that yes, I actually managed to write something! :3 and then wrote this piece.
(Anonymous) on November 20th, 2010 01:54 am (UTC)
hot damn!
1st time i've read about this trio & am so happy to have found this! it was so short but evoked such gorgeous visuals. its sexy but still pg-13. loved it. please write more! and a lemony one and/or longer (even multi-chap?) version would be most welcome by us fanfic starved readers!

(nypsy, not logged in)
Kit-chan: my dork senses are tinglingchiave_trust on November 20th, 2010 02:18 am (UTC)
Re: hot damn!
Maybe I rated it higher because I could see the entire image in my head whilst writing this.... ^^;
_debbiechan_: bitches love me by aubreywitch_debbiechan_ on November 20th, 2010 02:45 pm (UTC)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YES IT IS A TRADITION WITH YOU. You seem to have a talent for writing my fave hentai imaginings!

I didn't say specifically in the rules no other pairings in the BED soooo...

haha, I think I'm forced to put this in the competition. And I do love this trio--I wish there were more smut of it. <3
Kit-chan: my dork senses are tinglingchiave_trust on November 20th, 2010 02:50 pm (UTC)
Knowing Orihime, she'd probably think of it similar to a game. "Can we make Ulquiorra blush" (or other various things) XD

jczala: UlquiHimeIshijczala on November 23rd, 2010 11:20 pm (UTC)
Threesome! I approve!! This is really awesome. You did a great job.