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02 December 2011 @ 10:08 pm
IchiIshi CONT contest fic - Poem challenge  
Hello wonderful people. May I start the new great contest with my first, for now, fic? Yes you say? Well so here it is and the poem challenge no less XD
Ok, I think this is not Ichigo AT ALL, just too sweet and sappy for him, but I like how the poem turn out so here it is I hope you like it too at least a bit, and forgive me if there are english errors. Let me know and I'll correct them.

Oh and of course I’m not going to tell you which line is which fanart, why don’t you guess? XD
Enjoy and let me know what you think…^__^



TOGETHER… IS JUST A WISH

Fighting together.

Your back is touching mine

You try to protect me

You hurt yourself for me…because of me.

A cake is not enough to repay you, not at all.

We are not kids who go soiling walls anymore;

nor we are adolescents who hide the first lover letter of their life.

We are adults, with adult’s desires.

We already know the flavour of a kiss,

And the feeling of a morning after.

So, when a red balloon is passing by, we watch the blue sky,

The very same sky that existed in a far away past,

And I would like to wish "never let me go",

But for now just let me sleep on your shoulder

And maybe, one day, it will be yours the name that will escape my lips.
 
 
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agenttexasagenttexas on December 3rd, 2011 12:37 am (UTC)
Lovely! I like the rhythm it has.

Okay I couldn't tell all of them buuut this is what I think for some.

And maybe, one day, it will be yours the name that will escape my lips. "*mumble, mumble*"(absolutely hilarious xDD)

So, when a red balloon is passing by, we watch the blue sky, This one has to be "Balloonskopie"(which was beautiful)

nor we are adolescents who hide the first lover letter of their life. "Love Letter" duh XD (that one made me giggle)

And I would like to wish "never let me go" My entry xDDD

We are not kids who go soiling walls anymore; Graffiti by you (you did great on their expressions, by the way)

A cake is not enough to repay you, not at all. "Shut Up And...Eat This!" (one of my favs actually)

But for now just let me sleep on your shoulder "Stupid Kurosaki" (again made me giggle)

Uhh not sure about the others. I'm sure after I post this I'll realize the others and kick myself for posting this in a hurry XDD
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on December 3rd, 2011 09:26 am (UTC)
Thank you very much^^ it was fun to do ^^ Thank you for the comment on my pic too ^//^

and good job, you guess them all right... so we are 7/15 guessed now XD

_debbiechan_: Ishida hearts_debbiechan_ on December 3rd, 2011 02:47 pm (UTC)

omgosh! POETRY!

This works so well. I can see some of the references--the best part is ... it flows naturally.
Great job!
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on December 3rd, 2011 07:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much^^ My first try at poetry, I'm glad you like it^^