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06 November 2011 @ 08:16 pm
Birthday Contest 2011 [FanFiction] You run  
Hi, it's me again...
Me? writing in english? Yes indeed XD because a fanart is not enough and I would try to give something even on the fanficion part of the celebration.
So here it is, an angsty fic...and sorry for my english XD I hope you enjoy nevertheless.

Title: You Run
Fandom: Bleach
Paring: IchIshi (more or less)
Rating: just angst... but I think everyone who read Bleach can read this
Word: 222
Spoiler: chapter 430
Disclaimer: Ichigo, Ishida and all Bleach character belong to Tite Kubo-sensei



You run. Your feet are hitting loudly on the road. You run. Without taking break to regain your breath. You run, without realizing that taking a taxi would have get you there much quicker. You run, because when you had your powers you were faster than anyone else that way.

You run without thinking. Only 3 words in you brain, the only 3 words that you remember from that quick conversation on the phone just a few mitutes ago.

Ishida. Hospital. Hurt

You run because this is the only thing you can do. You run now because you did not feel Ishida’s reiatsu disappear and you could not run before, you could not run in time to help him, in time, maybe, to save him. You could only run now and it could be too late. You fear that, you really do.

You’re powerless, so powerless that you would like to cry, but there is no time now. You just need to run, quicker, faster and pray that once you get to the hospital Ishida will scream on you face, calling you an idiot because that is exactly what you are.

An idiot who can not help his friends like they did with him, an idiot you can only worry about his problems of being useless. And idiot who can, now, only run…
 
 
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nehalenia: ichigo pensivenehalenia on November 6th, 2011 07:23 pm (UTC)
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD!

You run, because when you had your powers you were faster than anyone else that way.

This is so perfect. I can 100% believe that this is exactly what was going through Ichigo's head after he got that call, that this is just what he did. Beautiful!
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on November 6th, 2011 07:30 pm (UTC)
KYAAAAAAA Thank you very very much ^////^ *blush* I'm so happy you like this and that you think that Ichigo is IC is the best compliment I could hope for *___*
Thank you again *hug*
♀*La Muerte Chiquita*♀: ishichila_kalaka on November 6th, 2011 07:33 pm (UTC)
OMG! awesome fic is awesome, doesn't matter the lenght the content is what matters and this is just perfect and great. I love the rythm of Ichigo's thoughs. I can feel his pain, his fears and his frustrations, all of them well portrayed here. It¡s so canon it gives me the shivers.

My vote for this, my love, have themm all <3
renki_chanrenki_chan on November 6th, 2011 07:53 pm (UTC)
I'm crying for happines here ç___ç Thank you very much ^///^ I'm so glad you like it this much even if is just a little fic. I'm not confident enough for writing a long fic in english, that is why I try with drabble and flash-fic alone XD
But you like it and you think this is canon and you even want to vote for it!....ooooh thank you, really really thank you. You made my day with your comment *hug*
Astraea: [bleach] ishi/ichilady_leia_solo on November 6th, 2011 07:48 pm (UTC)
I love this! Great job and I love the angst!
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on November 6th, 2011 07:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much ^_^ I'm glad you like it ^^
_debbiechan_: Ichigo in the rain_debbiechan_ on November 6th, 2011 10:52 pm (UTC)

oh YOUR ENGLISH IS GREAT!

Thank you so much for this. T_T

I love fics that fill in the canon timeline and amplify canon moments and this--omg, I feel so much for Ichigo here. Like Neha said, there's that horrible poignancy about Ichigo once having been the fastest in the world and now having to run with all his human strength to go somewhere where there's not much he can do anyway--

waaaaaah. LOVE THIS.
♀*La Muerte Chiquita*♀: ishichila_kalaka on November 7th, 2011 03:42 am (UTC)
there's that horrible poignancy about Ichigo once having been the fastest in the world and now having to run with all his human strength

Reading it all over again and then reading this line, it lands such a kick in my heart. I think I can't love Ichigo so much like I loved him being powerless. I loved the Lost Agent Arc VERY MUCH <3
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on November 7th, 2011 08:28 pm (UTC)
KYAAA Thank you so much ^_^ I'm so happy that you like it. I hope you can consider this an early present for your birthday since you like it^^

I love fic that fills canon too, that are the fic I like the most because you really need to keep the characters IC and write something that can be really possible. That's a real challenge and I like that XD I'm so glad you think this little fic is a good one ^^

Thank you again ^^
moga-moka: joymoga_moka on November 7th, 2011 02:05 am (UTC)
Tatally love it!!!>//////< It's just soooo CANON!

I feel pity for Ichigo in the arc. So powerless and confused. But, honestly, I like him that way^////^
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on November 7th, 2011 08:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much ^_^ I'm glad that everyone think this fic is good and canon. That is what I was hoping for *_*

Thanks again ^_^
galeayagaleaya on November 7th, 2011 03:27 pm (UTC)
I remember the manga~! <3
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on November 7th, 2011 08:31 pm (UTC)
That is what canon fic are for ^_^ Thank you ^_^
rocknyxrocknyx on November 8th, 2011 06:30 am (UTC)
;3; I liked this! I totally pictured this in ichigos voice in my head. and your english was pretty good! ;]
renki_chan: arigatourenki_chan on November 8th, 2011 07:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much^^ I'm glad you like it ^^