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06 November 2011 @ 12:22 am
Birthday Contest [fanfic] Back to Back  
So this is my first shounen-ai fic, so be gentle. I hope you like it Debbie and happy early birthday! Also happy birthday Ishida, you sexy nerd!

Title: Back to Back
Author: lady_leia_solo
Word Count: 333 words



Ishida mused on the words, he and Kurosaki had spoken. They did have each others back, but what was worrying him is that he wanted it to be more than that.

He didn’t know when he had developed these kind of feelings for Kurosaki. For the longest time, they had grudgingly worked together to achieve a final goal. He didn’t know when, but over the past few months he had slowly fallen for Kurosaki.

"I must be losing it" he said to himself "Kurosaki is brash, rude, and a brat"

And that’s what you love about him.

Ishida sighed. There was no use denying it, he was totally in love with Kurosaki. The only question was: how would he tell him?
***


He saw his opportunity when he spotted Kurosaki going up to the school roof. He followed him up the stairs, clutching his lunch tightly in his hand.

"What’s with the stalker act, Ishida?" he asked when they emerged.

Ishida looked into the dark brown eyes and felt his resolve melting. It was now or never.

"Kurosaki, I wanted to tell you something," he started.

"Alright go ahead," Kurosaki said running his hand through his wild orange hair.

Ishida opened his mouth, but before he could say anything. Mizuro, Keigo, and Chad emerged from the stairs.

"ICHIGOOO" yelled Keigo slapping Kurosaki on the back.

"Keep it down man," said Kurosaki rubbing his shoulder and then looked at him. "Ishida was about to tell me something."

With four pairs of eyes trained on him, Ishida suddenly felt nervous. He felt Kurosaki staring at him impatiently.

"It was nothing important," Ishida said calmly.

The other boys sat down with their lunches and began to chat, but he could still feel Kurosaki staring at him. He met his eyes and if he didn’t know any better, he could almost see an understand in Kurosaki’s eyes and for right now that was enough for him.
 
 
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♀*La Muerte Chiquita*♀: ishichila_kalaka on November 6th, 2011 09:18 am (UTC)
One of the things I loved about this fanfic was that you avoided the classic final with the confession and put it as a silent understanding between the two. This ask for a continuation *_*, small but enjoyable <3
Astraea: [bleach] food fightlady_leia_solo on November 8th, 2011 02:22 am (UTC)
I may continue it. I usually write drabbles and one shots XD I'm more comfortable with the format!
_debbiechan_: ICHIISHI DORKY LOVE_debbiechan_ on November 6th, 2011 10:36 am (UTC)

Yes, the Great Unspoken. It gave me a little thrill bubble. Thank you for this. <3
Astraea: [bleach] food fightlady_leia_solo on November 8th, 2011 02:21 am (UTC)
You're welcome Deb!
galeayagaleaya on November 6th, 2011 05:33 pm (UTC)
T^T sometimes there's no need for words..

<3 loved this
Astraea: [bleach] food fightlady_leia_solo on November 8th, 2011 02:20 am (UTC)
Thank you <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
luminous85: Contentluminous85 on November 8th, 2011 02:13 am (UTC)
You wrote them so well. I was so engulfed in the brief moment that I could swear I almost felt how either of them were feeling. It gave me goosebumps really. Especially the anticipation of all the possibilities a relationship between them could present. Wonderful job!
Astraea: [bleach] food fightlady_leia_solo on November 8th, 2011 02:19 am (UTC)
Thank you! I was a bit worried about writing them initially, I admit!
luminous85: Contentluminous85 on November 9th, 2011 06:35 am (UTC)
My pleasure! And worry no more. You have been successful! lol
rocknyxrocknyx on November 8th, 2011 05:57 am (UTC)
I liked this little story. It may have been short but it was still satisfying at the end! <3